Lead Balloons
Hi Meredith, I am ***** from *****. A friend of mine showed me your work. I was really impressed by the work you guys are doing at ***** and I would love to help you and your Company produce more leads for your service Because it's getting more and more difficult for Tech companies to scale or just to keep alive in this cut throat competition. What we do is automate your client acquisition process, So at the end of the day, when all is said and done by us, you just need to look at your calendar and show up for the meeting and attend the call with your potential customers We identify where your potential clients are we Lazer Target them and get them to sign up with you for your services. Do you have time to jump on a call to discuss further? Either way, it is free of cost. I simply want to talk more and learn more about your business. We will go through your business aim, future goals how you can take your bussiness to a new Level and how we will identify your potential customers.
1. "Because it's getting more and more difficult for Tech company..." [customers to find anyone to do their work].
2. "What we do is automate your client acquisition process, So at the end of the day, when all is said and done by us, you just need to look at your calendar and show up for the meeting and attend the call with your potential customers We identify where your potential clients are we Lazer Target them and get them to sign up with you for your services." Does this sentence need more than one period? Or more than two, or even three?
3. "Do you have time to jump on a call to discuss further? Either way, it is free of cost." I'm sure it's free of charge. Cost, however, is a different metric.
If this is one way, what is (or was) the "Either" way?
4. "I simply want to talk more and learn more about your business." I certainly believe the part about your wanting to talk. Learning more about someone's business involves other habits and practices.
5. "We will go through your business aim, future goals how you can take your bussiness to a new Level and how we will identify your potential customers." The 'business aim' is to make money. I have no idea what my future goals are, since I will only know them at some point in the future. One of my present goals is to communicate with my customers in clear, intelligible English.